1. What does a workshop draft (as a genre) look like?
A workshop draft looks like a bunch of ideas that are not well organized yet. It is in between an out-line and rough draft.
2. What's its purpose/audience?
Its purpose is to lay-out your ideas so when it comes time to write the rough and final copy you have your ideas there, you just need to organize them. The audience depends on the genre.
3. How does purpose/audience differ from a finished draft?
The finished draft is well organized and the ideas flow, and the point of the paper is clear to the audience
Essay R Feedback
To improve this Essay I would talk more about the 80s, since the paper was supposed to be comparing and contrasting wrestling from the 80s to now. The author didn't talk about how wrestling was back in the 80s, he just said that wrestling has changed, and said how the sport was now. Also he didn't say any similarities between wrestling from the 80s and now, he only focused on the changes, and I think he should have mentioned a few similarities. I think he should have given more detail too. There were a lot of places that he could have elaborated but didn't, such as he could have talked specifically about the wrestlers diets and then compared and contrast the wrestlers diets from 80s and the wrestlers now. Another thing I think the author could improve is he could have added background information on wrestling for those who read his paper and don't know a lot about the sport. Last, I think the author should have used more sources and got more information. On the other hand, I thought the author's opening paragraph was very good because it grabs the readers attention. Also another positive of the Essay was he used facts and numbers from a cited source for support.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment