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I would give this paper a C+ because he had some really good information and facts cited in his paper, but the assignment was to compare and contrast and he did state a lot of how wrestling has changed, but he didnt really say any simillarities. Also I think he should have cited more from other sources rather then just using one source. I think he should have included more info in some parts, like when he was talking about diets and exercises he could have mentioned some of the exercises and gave more detail in their diets, and then said how its different from the wrestlers back in the 80s. However, I do like how he started his paper with the opening paragraph because it grabs your attention. So therefore overall I would give this paper a C+.
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Yeah i agree a lot with what you are saying. I gave the paper a B- so we gave similar grades. I like the point you made about there not being many similarities mentioned in the paper. I agree with that point. I would also add that the grammatical mistakes he made throughout the paper hurt his grade for me as well.
ReplyDeleteI agree with both you guys on many of the points. The grammar and set up of the paper is pretty awful. A college freshman just shouldn't be making those kind of mistakes. A simple proofread would have eliminated many spelling and grammar errors. I would give the paper a lower grade however simple because when your in college you should revise your paper.
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